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Sunday, September 21st, 2003
1:03 am - Fic: Gotham Underground by Dana

twigged
Fandom: Smallville w/DC Comics crossover

Pairing: Clark Kent/Lex Luthor

Rating: NC-17

Reviewed by: siobhan_w

Why I specified this story: This is a long one, so I really appreciate the reviewer did not object to my choice! I'm not a prolific writer, and at the time I signed up, GU was my most recent fic. Before then I had co-written a couple fics, and I wasn't sure earlier work was representative of my current writing.


Lionel closes in on Clark and Lex offers protection.

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Friday, September 19th, 2003
11:38 pm - Fic: Restitution by Deslea R. Judd (XF)

deslea
Title: Restitution
Author: Deslea R. Judd (deslea)
Fandom/Pairing/Rating: X Files, Krycek/Marita, R
Disclaimer: Characters not mine. Interpretation mine.
Summary: Sometimes, to face the future, you have to face the past. Series tie-in, Herrenvolk to The Truth.
Why did I choose this story for review? I nominated this story, and one other, Eschaton (also novella length) for a few reasons. I suppose the main one is because I used to be a hard-core novel-length writer, and then I discovered the fun of crafting shorter stories, and I think I got out of practice with longer work for a while. So doing two novella-length in quick succession kind of challenged me to get past that. The other is because this story in some ways revisits something I tried to do a few years ago (in a different way) and it's interesting for me to think about what this did as a way of getting a perspective on my own development and strengths and weaknesses.

Restitution Part 1
Restitution Part 2
Restitution Part 3
Restitution Part 4


Many thanks to my reviewer, Nifra.

current mood: creative

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Wednesday, September 17th, 2003
7:21 pm - Las Palabras

babywitch
Title: Las Palabras
Author: babywitch
Fandom/Pairing/Rating: Everwood, Colin/Ephram, PG-15/R
Disclaimer: Not mine, not for profit, don't sue.
Warnings: None really. Implied sexual activity, maybe. And a swear word.
Summary: In which Colin wants to run away, Ephram is a realist, and words play an integral role.
Why Review?: I set out to accomplish something with this, which is not something that I normally do when I write. I wanted to evoke a mood, I wanted a certain tone, and I wanted to use words a certain way. And I wanted to see if that worked. And it's the story that - at the beginning of the challenge - I liked the most.

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7:25 am - Fic: In Rats' Alley by Sullen Siren

lorax
Not sure how I managed to get two people assigned to me, but here's the story the second picked.

Fic: In Rats' Alley
Author: Sullen Siren
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: None, but vague references to Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG-13
Why this one: I didn't specify a story. My criticizer picked this one.
Edited by: bad_elizabeth
Remus Lupin watched rats.Collapse )

current mood: sleepy

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Tuesday, September 16th, 2003
10:17 pm - Fic, Lotrips: "te anau"

buffett
Title: te anau
Author: buffett
Fandom: Lotrips
Pairing: Sean/Elijah
Rating: R-ish

Why did I pick this fic? I didn't--my FB'er did. This was both the shortest (ha! It's not THAT short) and the most effortful thing I wrote in lotrips. Kind of a writing exercise that ended up a fic. It was also by far the least feedbacked, so I'm glad it was chosen and very curious to see what's said.


oral fixationCollapse )

puppyCollapse )

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11:06 am - Fic: Dialectics by Zarah

ex_zarah5186
Fandom: LotRips
Pairing: Orlando Bloom/Dominic Monaghan
Rating: R
Why this one? The version you can read here is actually the second version of this story I wrote. Thing is that I didn't re-write it because I wanted to, but because the first version got lost (evil computers! we hates them, precious!) when I was almost almost finished writing this. It was a birthday story, though, so I had to sit myself down and somehow recreate the whole thing, and quickly. In a way, this try never seemed to measure up to the story I'd lost. Which is why I selected it for reviewing.
Reviewed by: lobelia321

[Wherein there's football (European), kayaking (New Zealand) and sex (British).]
Monday, September 15th, 2003
2:04 pm - Of Angels and Dreams by Bipolarbunny

bipolarbunny
Of Angels and Dreams

Fandom: Gundam Wing

Pairing: Duo/Heero

Rating: PG-13

Why this one: because...why not. Bad title, I'm aware. Fear my cliches!

On the dark streets of Space Colony L2...Collapse )

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1:11 pm - Fic: Polishing the Glass by semiteeny

spidey
Title: Polishing the Glass
Fandom: Jake's (original characters)
Pairing: harvard_sqSam/ty_conningsTy
Rating: PG.
Disclaimer: Umm... Sam and Ty are. Not. Real. They are inventions from the writers' twisted minds, and are merely represented by celebrity faces, which we also don't own. Do not steal these characters, as I will be sure to have lawyers jumping you if you even think about it.

"It was late, I was a little lonely, and a little sad..."

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8:48 pm - Fic: Motion Pictures by northern

northernveil
Fandom: Popslash
Pairing: JC/Nick
Rating: PG-13?
Why you specified this story: I like it. I'm interested in what others think of this JC.
Reviewed by supersyncspaz7

JC drinks Midori drinks and Nick is bleedingCollapse )

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7:38 pm - Skin Deep by Jem

crazybutsound
Fandom: *NSYNC slash
Pairing: Justin/Britney, with a vague side of lambs
Rating: Rish
Summary: Once there were five of you, then only two, and it was all just another stop on the road to being one.
Disclaimer: None of this ever happened, if only because it's set a few years from now. And also, there's the small matter of it being fiction. You know, fiction. Not true.
Author's note: Thanks to zarah5 for betaing.
Reviewed by: cathybites

Skin DeepCollapse )


current mood: nervous

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1:08 pm - Popsicle Day by Serial Karma

serialkarma
Title: Popsicle Day
Author: Serial Karma
Fandom: The O.C.
Pairing: Seth/Ryan
Disclaimer: Not mine. Not yours, either, though. Ha!
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: PWP (that's Porn With Popsicles. Sort of.)
Why this story: I didn't specify which story, and my reviewer chose this one after I mentioned that I'd written some O.C. after the assignments had been posted. This is fine with me, as I'm pleased with the overall shape of the fic, but am somewhat dissatisfied with certain aspects of it.


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9:45 am - Nothing Like the Sun by Victoria P.

musesfool
Title: Nothing Like the Sun
Author: Victoria P.
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: Hermione does what she must.
Pairing(s): Ron/Hermione, Draco/Hermione
Rating: NC-17
Why this story: Because it's fairly recent, and took me about six months to write. It's long, for me, and is about something other than A and B fall in love, so it's a departure from my usual romantic comedy style. I really like it, and am proud of it, but am still not entirely sure the plot works, particularly the Draco characterization and the ending.
Reviewer: celli


The war was going badly.

current mood: anxious
3:10 pm - Fic: Moving On by Ghani Blue

acari
Title: Moving on
Author: Ghani Blue
Fandom: Lotrips
Pairing: Viggo Mortensen/Orlando Bloom (Orlando/Sean Bean, Viggo/Mark Ferguson)
Rating: PG
Why this story: I didn't specify a story, but I'm happy this one got picked because I was thinking about doing some editing.

Moving on, and letting go.Collapse )

current mood: curious

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7:10 pm - Fic: "Nick" by Bad Elizabeth

bad_elizabeth
Fandom: Popslash.

Pairing: Um. I guess it would be Willa/Nick by default. Ew. ;)

Rating: PG-13.

Warnings: It's pretty tame. Unless you really dislike AUs, or the occasional cuss-word, I can't think of anything upsetting.

Why you specified this story: Honestly, I mostly participated because I thought it would be a good idea to work on my critique skillz, and it seemed a punk move not to put my own stuff up for scrutiny, as well. There wasn't anything special about either of the stories I picked, apart from the fact that seemed more accessible than the others.

Nick's life sucketh mightily. This is the way of the High School AU.Collapse )

current mood: mellow

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12:41 am - Fic: How the Story Goes by kaydee falls

kaydeefalls
Fandom: Lotrips
Pairing: Billy/Sean A., Dom/Elijah
Rating: PG-13
Why this one: I didn't specify a fic, but I have no objections to my reviewer's choice. I wrote this fic over a year ago -- one of my earliest RPS fics -- and oh, yes, it could use some work. *grins*

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current mood: nervous

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12:42 am - Fic: Every You, Every Me by Miri Ellie

alligatorsoup
Fandom: LOTR_RPS
Pairing: Elijah Wood/Orlando Bloom
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: BDSM

Link to off livejournal as I wrote it before I had a journal

current mood: awake

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12:31 am - Fic: To the Victors by Sullen Siren

lorax
Fic: To the Victors
Author: Sullen Siren
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: None, but brief mentions of Harry/Hermione and Harry/Draco
Rating: PG-13ish
Why this one: I didn't specify a story. My criticizer mention that she was looking for Firefly - which I offered to read for, but don't yet have any posted stories in, so she opted for this one. Sorry!
Edited By: deslea
When the war is over, the victors reap the spoils. And Hermione sees very clearly the price that was paidCollapse )

current mood: anxious

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9:02 am

mumblemutter
My fic, and I'm sorry for the lateness of the post, as I've been computerless and MIA for the past weekend and didn't get a chance read the email of the reviewer until now...:)

Title: Snippet 1
Fandom: Emslash
Pairing: Em/Dre
Reviewed by: northernveil

Snippet 1

sun

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Sunday, September 14th, 2003
7:04 pm - Fic: After the Call by nafs

nafs
Title: After the Call
Fandom: Backstreet Boys RPS
Pairing: Nick/Brian
Rating: R - mostly for violence
Warnings: WIP. Torture. Sci-fi/fantasy elements.
Why you specified this story: I didn't, actually, but I'm hoping, now that it's been chosen, that maybe some feedback will jump-start this long-neglected story.

Off-LJ link: After the Call

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3:49 pm - fic: checking in

thepsychicclam
Title: Checking In
Author: thepsychicclam
Pairing: Implied Dom/Lij & Billy/Orlando
Fandom: Lotrips
Rating: R
Reviewed by: annavtree
Summary: Elijah is an NYU college student and a drummer for the band.
Notes: This story is part of an AU storyverse eleanor_lavish and I created where Billy, Orlando, Dom, and Elijah are all part of a band in New York City. It's the Elijah introductory POV piece for the Valiant Effort series.

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